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08 March 2004 @ 12:22 pm
oh and..  
its snowing..:
Current Mood: grumpygrumpy
neuroticpitbullprojectpitbull on March 8th, 2004 07:09 pm (UTC)
snowing is always good if you are really gothic... lol

i read part of your satisfied story...love the first parts...dancing is an art..and sometimes best done alone...with the unnatural movements. submission to music is the best.
Braxana: fly_tarebraxana on March 8th, 2004 09:14 pm (UTC)
allo..:> ive added you to my friendslist...
so how did you find me?
and thank you for the comments about 'Satisfied' its a story i wrote back in college and of the various pieces, those two stories were the best that i had written... (which doesnt say much but oh well..:>)
neuroticpitbullprojectpitbull on March 10th, 2004 03:27 pm (UTC)
it is hot here in lost angels...still. not suitable for the pale and nocturnal.

i have read the entire story now...i could not read it all at once because i was in a frisky mood and it was causing me some frustration...and for some reason i thought there would have been more description of the bartender and dancer girl...as in the way she moved so unnaturally. and there was that hint of the third party becoming an interesting feature...but, kind of slight. more descriptions next time might be good. ;) well done.

also, i read what you wrote about cities...made my day. there can be more underneath all the apparent plasicity...
Braxanabraxana on March 10th, 2004 10:24 pm (UTC)
well thank you..:> its been awhile and yes.. more descripts would be better..:>

as for plasticity and LA.. true..:> but i was trying to describe basic impressions in a single phrase or word... in any case, i must admit i did like LA quite a bit from what i saw...
Braxana: fly_tarebraxana on March 8th, 2004 09:19 pm (UTC)
silly me.. just saw the msg on myspace..:>
ill add ya to Im and stuff..:>
neuroticpitbullprojectpitbull on March 9th, 2004 12:33 pm (UTC)
that is where i found it. i actually have seen your name among other things....